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Ask Your Employer to Revise a Job Offer

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The prompt

Help me write a polite, confident email asking the company to revise my job offer before I accept. Role and company: [role, company] Offer received: [fixed pay, variable, joining bonus, notice buyout, joining date, location or WFH terms] What I'd like changed: [e.g. higher fixed pay / a joining bonus to cover my notice period / a later joining date / remote days] My reasons: [current pay, competing offer if real, skills they asked for, market data I've actually seen] How much I want this job: [very keen / keen if terms improve] Write: 1. The email (150-220 words): thanks and enthusiasm, the specific ask with numbers, the reasons, flexibility on other terms, a clear next step. 2. A shorter version for a phone call or WhatsApp follow-up. 3. Replies for three outcomes: they agree, they partly agree, they say no. Don't invent offers, numbers or achievements; use only what I give you and mark gaps as [ADD].

Why this prompt

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• Written for ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini

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